cool cool cool awesome thank you everybody

(May 2022. At a party at PJ’s ILWE house, I gave a bunch of people a bus tour. I invited everyone to write a decentralized poem with me. Everyone contributed, at least 7-8 people. The title is my last line.)

ethereal connections like night in my mind

more like word word word word word
am i right
that wasn’t my line

who wants to follow that line up?

that was something someone said once

i will say heavenly in the air but i’m here

cheez it crumbs are strewn around my neck

or if you put butter on your finger and dip it in the dust
that is an advanced technique

advanced, but cold, trembling inside
a window out of these two eyes

the yeah was more punctuative,
like a comma
not the line but more of the yeah itself

figure skating across the latest of my mind
a dream realized

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